I changed the plot a bit. And the names. :P Here it goes:
Alexa begins the revolution in the middle of Court and calls in Magicians
Marid, Sebastian, and Nikki go over to Alexa's side
Eli goes with Alexa on principle alone
After rebels are gone, Janie leaves, too
Janie contacts Alexa (don't know how yet) and is brought into hiding
Alexa and the Warriors and Eli go into hiding in the Wizard City. Alexa and Marid's relationship is clarified during this two or three month process.
News of Aeris' corruption leaks to the public of the Shadow Realm
Shadow People start whispering and grumbling
Aeris has the Hunters and Warriors slaughter hundreds of the most rebellious people
Aiden leaves the Warriors and strikes out on his own in search for Alexa and the Magicians
Aiden dies during a creature attack/allergies
After finding Aiden's body (and not being able to heal it), Alexa goes out into the open with her 'freedom fighters'
The two sides clash and are fairly even in strength, but not in numbers. The Magicians make up for lack of population.
Unexpected allies arrive to fight for Jenny (creatures? Folk?)
Aeris disappears the second the odds aren't in her favor
The battle ends and every Healer available to the rebels goes to work
Alexa is interrupted in the middle of a healing and is told someone has specially requested an audience with her
Alexa goes to the outskirts of the rebel camp with Marla and Balthy and meets Jon, who says he was wrong, blah blah blah, and asks if he can join the cause.
It'll probably change again, but whatever. This worked out well and helped develop the romance between Sebastian and Nikki that I knew was going to be there from the beginning. I'm still not sure how to make Alexa and Marid just friends, but maybe I don't have to. I could always go with the cliche love triangle, but I kinda wanna do something different. I guess it all depends on Jon. I've got his character - mostly. Sometimes, I don't know what he'll do. I think I should do some more research into my own characters. :P
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